The Darkness in the Pines

The Beast of Fallow Pines

De: Harlan Graves

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

THE DARKNESS IN THE PINES
THE BEAST OF FALLOW PINES

This short story takes place before THE BEAST OF FALLOW PINES and SOMETHING IN THE WOODS.

After the tragic death of his wife, Howard Ward returned to Fallow Pines to live a life of quiet seclusion. When Howard comes across the mangled remains of a bear in the woods, he discovers that something he thought only existed in campfire legends is stalking the darkness of the pines.

For fans of cryptids and monsters in the woods.

Intense bigfoot action

I found this to be a great story to listen to while at work.
I Throw me enjoyed it

Great story give us more

I like the characters. I like all the descriptions of fight scenes. It was a great little story like to see more of that.

Interesting

I liked the main character but the story seemed to contradict itself. Spoilers: The old man lived on the mountain for years and suddenly that becomes a problem? What happened to the sheriff? Why was the beast 10 feet tall and bulletproof? I think this could have either been shortened (repetitive in areas) or lengthened to not be hurried at the end.
I do NOT like virtual voice. At all. It takes away from the experience.

Very good short story

The story was very well detailed and it kept me interested until the end 4 stars

intense plot

dislike short story to fast of ending scenario could have have longer build up to ending of a good story

Not a bad story.

it isn't a bad story... alittle different, and the thing took so much damage it was like a terminator. other then that id give it 4 stars

Interesting story with good twists!

A veteran who has done his time and learned the jungle ways of survival and booby traps has an encounter with something that isn’t supposed to be real. That’s what they said, but this good ole boy begs to differ.

No more virtual voice!!!

This short story was okay. I love stories about cryptids (new unknown creature features), but this sounded like a Bigfoot story. Not interested.

WTH

Stupid ending. Very disappointing. I do not recommend. Why bother writing a book when you ended up so abruptly?

Hate the virtual voice

This story is good butt the virtual voice sucks and really disappointing. This is worth a listen but the virtual voice takes all the guts out of it takes all the scare out of it ruins the atmosphere.