I Reincarnated as an Elf in a Broken World. ( Book 1 )

In a world created by a wicked god, hundreds of people live in destruction and war.There is a war between races and slavery and no other god puts his hands in this world to help him.The protagonist reincarnated as an elf in this destroyed world, and elf is the most enslaved race, what will become of him now?

poor execution but interesting concept

parts of the book sound like it was sent through Google translate and or written by a child. i like the story but the execution is lacking

Not worth it, even when it's free.

This story is badly written, instead of using descriptive language it uses excuses. Over explaining every action and not using characters and their interactions to build the world and their personalities. I stopped even trying at part 4 because the reasoning and development was so stupid and absurd that it wasn't worth the pain of listening to. It didn't help that virtual voice didn't know how to read or pronounce a lot of words cementing the impression of a new child writer being the author. If that is the case, then they did pretty well but should have someone properly proof read and give suggestions before publishing next time.