Fragments of the First Realm

A Dungeon Core Harem LitRPG Saga

De: Marko Duskborn

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

A Dungeon Core Harem LitRPG Saga

He died coding. Now he builds worlds—with power fueled by love.

Marcus Chen was just another burned-out developer until one fatal all-nighter rewrote his destiny. Waking in a shattered dimension as a Realm Weaver Core—a rare Dungeon Core variant—he gains control over fragmented realities and the power to shape a new sanctuary from scratch.

But strength in this world doesn't come from grinding alone.
Here, connection is power.

As Marcus bonds with powerful women like Lyanna, a stranded warrior with her own mysterious past, he unlocks combat upgrades, synchronized magic, and core-level evolution. Every relationship isn’t just romantic—it’s system-integrated, enhancing his abilities and the strength of the Haven itself.

Enemies loom. A guild watches. And Marcus is running out of time to master his power, expand his sanctuary, and protect the people who’ve chosen to stand beside him.

🔥 What to Expect:

• ✅ Dungeon Core + LitRPG mechanics (Core Levels, Avatars, Fragment Integration)

• ✅ Emotional and escalating harem relationships tied to game progression

• ✅ Realm building, skill trees, stat menus, and synced combat

• ✅ Tastefully written heat with real character depth

• ✅ Power fantasy with purpose—save fragments, build love, protect the realm

Fans of Rogue Dungeon, Herald of Shalia, Tower of Somnus, The Dungeon Slayer, and Summoned Again will feel right at home in this immersive, high-stakes, heart-driven LitRPG world.

An interesting premise whose name execution is mostly boring AI slop.

The initial premise and first chapter or two are interesting enough. But then the reality sets in: the majority of this "book" feels AI-written. Between obnoxious word choices (everything is "unprecedented" or "critical" or "unlimited potential"), sentences and phrases that awkwardly repeat, information discontinuity (going from not knowing anything about a topic to being an expert five minutes later), repeatedly "reflecting on all that had changed" in the last hour, and so on, it's just poorly written.

And that's the parts that constitue writing at all. About 1/3 of the entire book is just status read outs, even when utterly unnecessary.

There was a mention of a romance, but it so minimalistic, boring, and clinically sterile that you'd be forgiven for forgetting it was supposed to be a major factor.

Honestly, the AI-voice was probably the best part of this, and that's saying quite a lot.

I can't imagine anyone who should waste their time on this book.

Sounds and Feels Like a PowerPoint Presentation

Like the title says the story is written like a PowerPoint. Most of the book feels like a bunch of bullet points. And despite the book being about 5 hrs long it still manages to backup and run over previous bullet points over and over.