Floor 24

A Skyline Murder Mystery, Book 1

De: Martin Hill Ortiz

Narrado por: Robert T. Sutherland

A pen falls from a high rise and shatters at the feet of New York World reporter and World War vet Alan Priest. Its broken barrel bears the name and office of Fritch Designs on the 24th floor. On a whim, he investigates. As he reaches floor 24, he finds a window open and a corpse on the sidewalk below. A gawker from a nearby office window recognizes the corpse by her dress, sees Alan looking out the victim’s window and screams.

Someone bolts from the office, and a hasty pursuit ends in a policeman being hurled to his death and Alan being accused of both murders.

He seeks shelter with the help of gentlemen’s club hostess Lorraine Marquette, which lands both of them in police custody. But the mob king of New York has the police in his clutches and soon Alan and Lorraine find themselves released solely to uncover the secret behind Fritch Designs, a secret that could cost them their lives as they evade assassins and brave the lethal heights of a city growing at a mad pace.

Floor 24 is a heart-stopping, old-fashioned adventure with a reckless pace and breakneck twists.

©2024 Martin Hill Ortiz (P)2025 Martin Hill Ortiz

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"From the mob underworld to the tops of new skyscrapers, Floor 24 is a heart-thumping New York 1920’s historical mystery!” — Holly Newman, bestselling author of the A Chance Inquiry mystery seriesManhattan, 1926.

Murder, Twists, and a View from the Edge

I hit play on Floor 24 during a long drive, and I was instantly hooked. The murder, the mystery, the high-rise setting ,it all had this eerie, locked room vibe that kept me guessing. Martin Hill Ortiz builds suspense without overdoing it, and Robert T. Sutherland’s narration added just the right amount of tension. I felt like I was right there on the 24th floor, piecing it all together. If you're into clever mysteries with atmosphere, this one's a ride.

Noir Vibes, Fast Falls, and Faster Twists

I started Floor 24 on a lazy Sunday, expecting a slow burn ,what I got was a rocket ride through 1940s New York. Alan Priest is the kind of gritty, unlucky hero you root for, and the opening scene hooked me fast. The mix of crime, conspiracy, and sky high danger had me pausing just to catch my breath. Felt like stepping into a black and white film, but with earbuds. If you're into old school thrillers with sharp writing, this one's gold.

Felt Like I Was in a Black and White Thriller

I threw this on during a rainy weekend, not expecting much and got totally hooked. The vibe was gritty, fast, and just the right amount of chaotic. I kept picturing those old school noir films my grandfather loved, but with a sharper edge. The pace doesn’t let up, and the whole feeling kept me glued. I even paused dinner to finish a chapter. If you like twists and tension, give it a go.




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Couldn’t stop listening

I went in with zero expectations and ended up glued to my headphones. The tension ramps up fast, and I kept telling myself “just one more chapter” before realizing an hour had flown by. I loved how every moment felt purposeful, and I kept forming theories as things unfolded. It had me checking the clock at night because I didn’t want to pause. If you enjoy being pulled into something intense and unpredictable, this one hits the spot.

Had Me Listening Way Later Than I Planned

I started this one during a quiet night at home and didn’t expect it to pull me in so fast. The tension built in a way that made me keep saying, just one more chapter. I kept comparing parts of it to odd moments I have encountered where something felt off, which made it even more gripping. The pacing worked well, and the twists landed without feeling forced. At the end of the day I was genuinely glad I picked it up.

A Thrilling Ride from Start to Finish

This book had me hooked right from the start. The suspense kept building, and I found myself trying to guess what would happen next, only to be surprised every time. I enjoyed how the story kept me on edge without feeling dragged out. It’s the kind of read that makes you want to talk about it with someone right away.

Enjoyable Noir Style Mystery

When a pen falls from a skyscraper and shatters at reporter Alan Priest’s feet, its markings lead him to Fritch Designs on the 24th floor. There, he discovers an open window and a dead woman on the street below—moments before he’s mistaken for her killer. Fleeing with the help of club hostess Lorraine Marquette, Alan soon learns that the police are under the mob’s control. To clear their names, the two must uncover the deadly secret behind Fritch Designs while evading assassins high above a rapidly changing New York City.

The author, Martin Hill Ortiz, delivers a true noir experience—gritty, fast-paced, and full of tension. The suspense builds naturally and the action never lets up. The plot twists hit just right and were unexpected. The characters are well-developed, and their dialogue feels authentic to the era and tone. From the first page, I was drawn in completely and felt connected to every moment and every character.

Narrator Robert T. Sutherland’s deep, rich voice perfectly captures the noir atmosphere of this story. His clear delivery and distinct character voices bring each scene to life. He conveys the suspense and tension with precision, and his tone shifts seamlessly to match every plot twist and emotional turn. A performance that truly enhances the entire listening experience.

A thoroughly enjoyable noir mystery filled with gripping action!

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A Very Thrilling Listen.

I didn’t expect to get pulled into this audiobook so quickly, but once I started, I kept finding excuses to continue. The tension felt real, and it reminded me of the times I’ve stayed up late just to finish a good movie. I liked how each moment was delivered beautifully,it kept me alert. By the end, I felt like I’d been on the ride with the characters. It was worth every minute of listening.

Engaging

This is a hear stopping, old fashioned adventure with a reckless pace and breakneck twists.
A heart stopping adventure full of twists and turns, as Alan navigates the complex web of crime and corruption that surrounds him.

Did not see that twist coming

I picked this up just looking for a quick mystery, but wow it really pulled me in. The pacing was tight, and the setting gave off this tense, closed in vibe that made it hard to put down. I thought I had the ending figured out halfway through… I was wrong. That final twist actually made me go back and skim a few earlier chapters. Definitely a fun read if you're into crime with a bit of a psychological edge.