A HOT BOY SUMMER WITH A CHOCOLATE BBW

De: NATE MCGUIRE

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Saint Martin Verlice is the son of king and queen pin. Recently getting out of a situation-ship, he plans to have himself a hot boy summer to test the waters. By chance, he happens to encounter the drop dead gorgeous Annalise – who’s vacationing on his family’s island, St. Verlice.

Immediately commanding Saint’s attention, Annalise, intrigues him in ways he never even knew existed. Realizing they share an instant chemistry, the two decide to spend the whole summer together.

Join Saint and Annalise in this cute novella as he helps her explore his family’s island and she helps him explore her heart.

It was cool story line, at the beginning BUT

The ending was horrible! So shes going to mess up the money for some head? Something she could've gotten from anyone!? WTF! I have better addition you could use. Why didn't you elaborate into Annalise father. Maybe his father could've been his right hand and took over the business which caused an issue in their relationship. If you need help call me. I'm so mad right now.

Weird Ending

The way the story ended disappointed me..it left me hanging. I'm not sure what the author was trying to do.

Great story

I did not like the ending of this story. I wish it would have ended way before the meeting

Left hanging

The story started off like a young love affair, and then there’s no conclusion it’s a decent listen to, but then we need a conclusion! If you wanna be left on the cliff, listen to this book

Idk…

*SPOILERS IN REVIEW*

This story just didn’t flow right to me. A couple of things were just odd.
-She goes to a party at his house the same day they meet and the mom asks her to spend the night and she agrees. What?!
-During the MMC dad’s speech at the party, he acknowledges the FMC, who he hasn’t even been introduced yet, and goes on about her being good for his son and wanting to see her at more gatherings. Again, what?! Mind you, they’ve known each other less than 24hrs.
-One minute the FMC is being bashful about being a virgin, the next minute she’s a pornstar.
-Her insecurity throughout the story gets very annoying. She doesn’t know how to just accept a compliment.
-Where does the FMC dad come into play? Why was his little bit of history even mentioned if it has no significance?
-The ending….just why?! There was very little info about the MMC family business and the part he plays in it, so I don’t understand why that business situation was thrown in at the end.
-The author’s did a lot of repetition of words and phrases.