Secretly Submissive

"I am immune to hypnosis. Here is why. The end."

That was the plan. For Mei, a chronic overthinker with a brain like a browser with fifty tabs open, the concept of "heightened suggestibility" isn't just unscientific—it’s an insult to her intelligence. When her roommate Miranda challenges her to stop complaining and actually prove it, Mei decides to turn her skepticism into an A-plus paper.

She settles in to debunk the most extreme content she can find: a "Deep Obedience" file from a dusty corner of the internet. It’s ridiculous. It’s absurd. It’s the perfect target for a cynical critique.

But as the low, warm voice begins to speak, the static in Mei’s head starts to fade. The relentless internal monologue she’s lived with her entire life begins to thin out, replaced by a strange, heavy quiet. What starts as a clinical experiment quickly spirals into something she never saw coming.

Mei went into her room to prove she couldn't be controlled. She’s about to find out that the version of herself she presents to the world is just the surface— and that underneath the skepticism, something else has been waiting for the right voice to tell it what to do.

A gripping psychological exploration of surrender, the dual nature of the mind, and the pleasure found in letting go in 11k words.