Ok... here I go...

First... Narration needs to be tackled first and foremost. The narration was bad, yes... but literally after the Japanese restaurant scene which is like chapter 2 I think.. you totally don't even notice it... Well I take that back... You do notice it...but the story kinda makes you not really care, a little... not a lot... but a little to continue... it is just so strange. The female voices don't really change that much and the male voice change only slightly... You can tell that the male voice is different from the female voice, but it is not a sexy, romantic male voice that just pulls you in. It is just bad narration.. In other words... I am guessing the narrator is new to narrating...

Ok.. Second... the story is written so strangely where I was so fixing to stop listen because I was kinda of getting bored. Even though chapter one opened up with a sex party I was still bored..Then by chapter 2, when Jane was going to say no to Luke, and he shows up and whisked her away to a Japanese restaurant...I got so intrigued, that I had to keep listening. But here is the problem with that. Right after, I got so pissed off at Luke, on how he treated Jane, I wanted to stop listening, plus the narration was just so freaking bad, but hen something else would happen, and then dang...I just had to continue. Well this kept happening right up until the end.. The very freaking end... until Luke pierce Jane's nipples and she walked down the idle naked to their beach wedding, then it ended..Just like that.

Now I am a bit pissed off... because honestly, it was a good story, and I am just so utterly in state of blah! I really don't know how to feel.. I liked it but I didn't...Jesh!

So Yes to Credit, No to Buy... Yes to Sale.. Overall this is a 3.5, for storyline, 2.5 for narration, and 2 for a cliffhanger ending... so there you have it...

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