Has some deep flaws and little pregnancy

The woman in this is pregnant and showing, and the text occasionally reminds us of this; that's not enough to make this pregnancy erotica - the pregnancy has to BE erotic, to be a major source of the sexual energy and pleasure in the scene, and this just doesn't meet the bar. On top of that, it uses the word "orgasm" a lot, which is distracting, and it has flaws like not understanding how the cervix works or that women don't just orgasm over and over or orgasm at the drop of a hat. None of the flaws are deal breakers, but they all detract from the fun. Furthermore, I don't think the writers have a good grasp of pregnancy fetishism OR diaper fetishism; they treat the second with almost the same perfunctory attitude as the first, not grasping that simply mentioning fetish objects and behaviors in your work is not enough to make it attractive to people with that fetish. Having said all that, the sex scenes are not nearly as bad as they could be; there are actually some hot moments and creative ideas here and there. However, these moments are too few and far between for me to recommend this one. The reader is okay, but for some reason, her female voices sound more masculine than her male voice, and it's a little off-putting.

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