First, the typos normally I'm the first to say disregard them but there were just too many then add in the many missing words. This causes too much re-reading a sentence for comprehension.
Secondly, this was pretty good, the storyline, Ryder's tragic past made for good reading, heartfelt; my only issue was Lexi. What caused her issue? IMO it went on way too long with no end in sight.
Third, Hit Man, the whole cheating thing but yet he loves his baby Mama, cheating should be listed in the synopsis as well as a MM relationship. Total honesty.
Lastly, I love Ryder's constant mind song referral but if you don't know the song and/or artist, it's a major distraction to look it up.
This is a different rock star romance read, the style is unique and may be for you. I can see how many would love it but since I read a lot of them I need it to be more polished. The MCs connection was weak and more on Ryder's end then Lexi, you're told how she's always loved him but it's not felt. I just needed a little more. Will i read Jase's story, probably not. I'm sorry.