This was a quick read...not great, but ok. Decent idea but it felt like the hero’s back story could have been explored a bit more. The development of the relationship really dragged for me...like, just get to it already. Not enough smolder to refer to it as “slow burn” it was more like tepid to....
they have sex for the first time on a washing machine?
After that the time lapses were annoying with little to zero detail. I felt like she should have moved the time line up, get to the mom’s story quicker and spent more time there and with resolution of the conflict of the family and main characters.
just ok for me 🤷🏼♀️