Okay, so this is one of those inexplicable alpha/omega stories that started popping up on tumblr and fanfiction sites a few years ago. "Alphas" are uber-masc men and "omegas" are softer, more effeminate men that can bear children. Got it? Okay.
Forget Me Knot is fanfiction. The characters are flat, and the plot is basically a series of rom-com tropes. The pacing is way too fast. The erotica is so-so, but there are lines that just grossed me right out (unintentionally). I doubt I'm the main audience for this novel; it seems aimed at women more so than gay men. I will be vague and say that it is very evident from certain passages that the author is inexperienced with how a certain demographic makes love.
There are so many fanfiction authors who do what Frost did here, but better. The alpha-omega dynamic can be done well, but this felt underdeveloped, like a rough draft. Frost could really be something--the potential is there--but they really need to sit down and develop their plot and characters.