I am a sucker for love stories.
Having said that, there is a bit of inconsistency with Jem in this story that bothered me. At the end was a sort of acknowledgement of this in what I think is a kind of cop out. Kinda like saying, yeah I broke the established character attributes but I put in this couple of sentences that make it ok.
Otherwise I found it engaging and passionate. It is all we want to see in their relationship. But sometimes getting what you want is cheapened when in the back of your mind you know it shouldn’t be this way. That’s why I’m giving a 4 instead of a 5.