I liked the story but when my kindle says I'm 85% thru the story there should be 15% more story left. It was a cute story, Flame, his brother and his cousin take a trip and to get it free or at a discount I didn't understand that, they were on a bride quest from their planet, Flame was actually tricked into it, he thought he was just going on vacation, but they were dropped off in Las Vegas where he discovers Ice Cream and tries to eat it by the vat from the ice cream store, when they don't move fast enough for him because who orders a tub of ice cream he tries to serve himself and the cops are called. Flame/Vin falls in love with the female officer who comes to arrest him and then when his brother and the mail order brides people break him loose she gets in trouble but she can't stop thinking about him. Her main concern is her mother, she can't lose her job because her mother has senile dementia and she has to get her into a better home. So she is very surprised when she is visiting her mother and Vin shows up.
Now all they have to do is hide from the alien hunters and convince Vin's brothers that they can stay on earth.
Cute story, just stop finishing the story at 85% thru the book and stuffing the book with previews from other books