I gave this book four stars for the plot it's good, solid but the Author in my opinion doesn't bring it across. She continuously repeats herself chapter after chapter I want developments, I want the mush and the angst but stop repeating the character name five times per paragraph, stop repeating they've been hurt we know move on from there.
Chara is supposed to be a bad ass Queens knight yet you've barely had her face off against anyone you could've dived into that plot, Mara could've went to her world even just to help, what became of the parents? What happened when Chara went back? How did she get back to Mara? There is so much left unsaid with your writing and it's absolutely annoying. So despite having the plots I could've thoroughly enjoyed I doubt I'll be buying anymore of your books which is disappointing because I would've enjoyed them having written better