This book is unreadable. Characters aren’t believable or compelling, and the writing is childish— in the middle of a slaughter, she’s going to be turned on by a manly chest? Really?
I got through chapter one, skipped around to see if it would gets better. It doesn’t.
Returning it to the used bookstore from whence it came.
There’s nothing wrong with young writers, fanfiction, etc. But if something is published, I expect a certain quality.