Interesting characters, and interesting story line, - BUT she dwells too much on repeating how the girl is so taken by the boy and how much he is so perfect, and does not even complete one story in a book. I started it in the 1sr installment of what was supposed to be a series. It barely scratched the surface, and was really only a chapter. It figured it was a teaser and designed to lead into the story. The 2nd (?) installment?? - which I thought was supposed to be a whole story - was not. I would like to know what happens to the characters, but am not willing to pay double for one complete story, especially when so much wordage was wasted on describing the teen angst and emotions, when it was certainly established in much less time.
I think Ms Peebles has potential that could be developed and honed into some really good storytelling.