A few things in the story don't make sense. Like when a man is carrying a bag and then a woman hands it to him. And how conveniently people from different places are suddenly in the same place. Or a dog that takes down a killer is earler locked by that same killer in a room in a barn without attacking him.
I would have liked the story to have more suspense. But the reader already knows who the bad guys are early in the story. And we know the two lovers will be together in the end. But they get together so fast. Too fast.