I think I got through the first chapter but the inconsistent and nonsensical plot got to me and I gave up early.
A character is described as someone who "had never done anything quietly in his life if there was a way to get a fight out of it." But later on the same page we're told that guy retired from mining in the belts, bought a farm, got married, raised kids, and gets into community service. Somehow those two descriptions don't seem to go together.
Then we have a prisoner being escorted to an interrogation center, where the interrogator can immediately tell by equipment on his desk that the human-looking prisoner is actually an alien. An alien who has had surgery, implants, injections and skintuning to make him appear to be human. They immediately blast him with a high-pressure water hose which throws him across the room and he loses his eye glasses. No mention is made of how a 3rd story office just happens to have a remote-controlled fire hose, nor of how the water is contained and prevented from soaking through the floor to the rooms below. We just assume that all offices in the future have remote-controlled fire hoses.
Neither the interrogator nor the captors sees the obvious - that an alien that went through all that body-changing surgery would never give himself bad eyesight, (meaning the glasses must have another purpose). Since they want to be nice to the alien before torturing him some more, they return his glasses, which the fancy scanning machinery doesn't detect is really an explosive device.
And of course, since the prisoner was not hand-cuffed, even after they realize he's an alien spy, he throws his explosive glasses across the toom, gets away from his FOUR captors and jumps out the window before the bomb explodes. Yes, it's common-place for interrogation rooms in the future to have windows handy for prisoners to escape.
The window is three stories up, but there is no mention of how the prisoner avoids injury, nor any mention of his captors' trying to chase him. I assume they are too busy cleaning up the water from the fire hose.
The alien hears sirens "in the distance". What? In the distance? The cops didn't think to set off a local alarm when their prisoner escaped? Duh! If they did that the prisoner might not escape, and the authors need him to escape, so they ignore any idea of a follow-up chase.
The alien goes to an apartment and uses some potions to completely change his appearance, picks up identification papers to match his new body, and then heads for the spaceport. On the way he sees a police car, and sneaks away to avoid it. He must be really worried about attracting attention.
A little farther on he runs into a bunch of folks about to have a shoot-out, so in order to avoid attracting the attention of the police he pulls his gun and starts shooting people. Yep, you heard that right, that's exactly what he does, and that's exactly when I quit reading this nonsense.