I loved it of course. Now my own suggestions. Change the cabin in the woods to a cabin on a cruise sponsored by an largely out-of-print magazine. Also, the crew should be in the their whites. As evidence of their debauchery will be more noticeable, thus memorable. I AM TALKING IMPACT. Also for those without girlfriends, they should give each one at the beginning of the cruise to talk with for hours and have dinner with and maybe in the morning grab a bite of porridge at the buffet. So we really feel a connection between ourselves and the women we aren't having sex with.
Looking forward to more.