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Lisa, a nice young southern girl accepts an offer that she thinks only trashy Alabama redneck trailer park whores would, and do, die for.

But it's a lot of money.

It is unemployment that pushed her into the dark web. Will she become a missing person or leave the dark, hot and sweaty, like the south?

©2021 B.E. WOlf (P)2022 B.E. Wolf

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Short erotic story of BDSM. Lisa is a willing participant. The potential reward (money) surpasses the risk (being seen by someone she knows). The author does a good job of the fine line of consent, with not really knowing what you consented to. I expect Lisa will choose to take the reward again, if it is offered. Narration was good.

I received a free copy of this as an audio book, and am providing my review voluntarily.

BDSM

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Very well written and told. He is a new author to me. I do like his erotic books so I will be checking more of his books out.

Good Read

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This is a very short story two chapter story written in the form of a journal by nineteen-year-old Lisa Jenkins from small town Alabama. She is struggling to make ends meet. While her sister Rebecca was supposed to get her a job at her airline, Lisa’s dreams, aspirations, and inspirations in reality translates to her working in a call center or working retail neither of which really covers rent.
Starting with a Snapchat account she begins to market herself.
Ruan as narrator tells the story with humor certainly with passion and shares all the thoughts that wrestle around in her mind with every step of the story. Her narration was better than the book! She skipped over the typos and words that didn’t make sense!

I cannot wait until the next two chapters of this story to continue. I also will look for her other narrations

a short hot story

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Lisa is in deep. Yeah, she has money troubles. But, she kicks that up 50 notches by really jumping into the deep end of the dark web. I enjoyed the story and Ruan's nice and sweet sound effects.

In the Dark for the Dark Web

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This story actually has potential — the pacing is quick, the premise is wild enough to keep you curious, and the writing itself isn’t the worst thing I’ve ever endured. It’s not great, but it’s serviceable. If anything, the writing is trying its best to hold the whole operation together.

Unfortunately, the dialogue keeps tripping over its own shoelaces. For a dark erotic suspense story, you expect sharp edges, tension, maybe a little moral rot. Instead, the main character talks like she’s practicing “grown‑up voice” in the mirror. It’s not horrible, but it’s definitely immature enough to break the mood every time she opens her mouth.

And then… the narrator.
Oh, the narrator.

She reads this book like a dyslexic four‑year‑old tackling her first chapter book in front of the class — hesitant, confused, and putting emotional emphasis on random words like she’s throwing darts at a wall. Every sentence sounds like she’s discovering the plot at the exact same time you are, and not in a fun way. More like, “Wait… what’s happening? Oh. Oh no.”

The mismatch between the genre and the delivery is so intense it becomes its own form of entertainment. The dark web isn’t dark — it’s daycare.

Overall:
A fast listen with a decent premise and okay writing, but the childish dialogue and painfully amateur narration drag the whole thing into “accidentally comedic” territory. If you enjoy chaos, you might have fun. If you came for dark erotic suspense… good luck.

The Plot Tried. The Narrator Did Not.

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