The story would have been better if you hadn't had the girl asking so many stupid questions. Whats going on, when we the people are receiving the info..Show More »rmation at the same time as everyone else. Second stop have her scream every time something happens.
Young women may be scared but at times we figure things out and at others times we remain silent to think and watch others and take actions based on them. You wrote her as strong and spoiled but not ignorant.