the narrator has a different speech pattern & i think at first it was too distracting. after i got more used to it, i felt lost in the story. as f..Show More »or the story, there were just too many inconsistencies. i really wanted to like this book. it sounded like a good story. but it felt like a first attempt, so i was surprised to see that the author had several books out & had won awards.
I struggled to finish this book. I wanted to like it. I wanted to be interested but I couldn't. Addison comes across as an idiot.l and the dialog soun..Show More »ds mechanic. The author states the obvious all the time as if she doesn't think a reader can put two and two together and this story was all tell and no show. Many overused lines and sentences th at have been recycled over the years.