I loved this story despite the fact that the bakery played only a small part in it. The author has some writing tics that the grammarian in me flagged..Show More » as careless, potentially confusing writing frowned upon by English teachers everywhere. The narrator did a fine job.
I like the first book and I love the characters. But I think that they could have gotten both these books in one. Because it seemed way too long for t..Show More »wo books. So it begins to get tedious and boring. It also seemed like the friends really had nothing in common with each other besides talking about sex. Don't get me wrong I enjoy my sex in a book very much. But I think there could be a little more depth to the characters. All in all I did enjoy the books
Better storyline! First book gave me hope, second book I skipped because I was too much BlaBla that could have been said in short order. I loved the m..Show More »ale character in this book. I felt more should have been built on real storyline. Sure they held out on Intercourse... for a whole what week! Sex is any type of pleasure. Not going to give away more. I'm sending this back and using my credit for a better book. Sorry! I wanted to LOVE!