I really like the idea of an overweight vampire. It's fresh and new and it promises something different. Alhough it was original it really didn't take..Show More » off. Wasn't as clever as I hoped it would and it falls a little flat. No believability in dialog or characters either. There were some great ideas, but all and all it reminds me of a rough draft. In different hands this story really could have turned out well.
This was funny and sweet with a touch of cleverness that didn't go too far. Different from standard vampire tales, you won't find sparkles or pre-ado..Show More »lescents pining for each other in this tale. I sincerely enjoyed every minute!