There was a lot about this story that I enjoyed. The author wrote it in a way that I could easily envision it, and I was captivated f..Show More »airly quickly by it in the beginning. That is, until the conversations started. The first one between Kaliel and Krishani felt so awkward - and not in a good way. Part of the time I wasn't sure who was talking. Not just between the two of them, this applies to many of the conversations throughout.
I felt the story was sometimes hard to keep up with, at some parts, but then something would happen that would get things back on a good pace and I would get myself back into the story. The biggest issue I had was the love aspect of it. I understand why it happened, and what was going on between the two of them - but it just felt weird to me.