This audiobook has a great concept, although not exactly a new o..Show More »ne. Parts I liked, but I couldn't complete this audiobook. It rambles and falters. It waxes and wanes. It lacks focus and drive.
I had high hopes for this work, but I also want to encourage the author.
Narro, you've got something here, but do NOT be rushed. Take your time. Do NOT be pushed by editors and publishers with their own agenda. Rewrite pages. Think of how people actually speak to one another - Not the specific words, but the way people think, react and respond to each other. And NO ONE talks alike to another - We're different, we're unique in our mannerisms and responses. Use that as a means to create captivating conversation.
You're almost there. Just don't rush the work. Edit, edit, edit.
To Audible listeners, you can do better. Move along.