• The Wretched of Muirwood

  • Legends of Muirwood, Book 1
  • By: Jeff Wheeler
  • Narrated by: Kate Rudd
  • Length: 8 hrs and 50 mins
  • 4.5 out of 5 stars (3,603 ratings)

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The Wretched of Muirwood

By: Jeff Wheeler
Narrated by: Kate Rudd
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In the ancient and mystical land of Muirwood, Lia has known only a life of servitude. Labeled a “wretched”, an outcast unwanted and unworthy of respect, Lia is forbidden to realize her dream to read or write. All but doomed, her days are spent toiling away as a kitchen slave under the charge of the Aldermaston, the Abbey’s watchful overseer. But when an injured squire named Colvin is abandoned at the kitchen’s doorstep, an opportunity arises. The nefarious Sheriff Almaguer soon starts a manhunt for Colvin, and Lia conspires to hide Colvin and change her fate. In the midst of a land torn by a treacherous war between a ruthless king and a rebel army, Lia finds herself on an ominous journey that will push her to wonder if her own hidden magic is enough to set things right. At once captivating, mysterious, and magic-infused, The Wretched of Muirwood takes the classic fantasy adventure and paints it with a story instantly epic, and yet, all its own.

©2011 by Jeff Wheeler. (P)2012 Brilliance Audio, all rights reserved.

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Faith-based fantasy series

Good narration. Religious Epic Fantasy, told in 3rd person POV, almost entirely from the perspective of the 13-year-old heroine, Lia. She's the titular "wretched" because she was abandoned at birth at Muirwood Abbey, and doesn't know her lineage. Strangely, we also get a very brief perspective from the false-Maston, a thief with a name like Scarface.

No sex and no swearing, but there is death, sometimes gruesome. The story contains several recognizable religious messages — mainly Christian and Mormon undercurrents. Faith versus fear. Family, ancestry, resurrection, the laying on of hands, the passing of gifts, the sacred nature of scripture, reading, and writing. The Medium represents the Spirit, or God. The "myriad ones" are demons.

Happily, the events unfold in linear fashion, with none of that annoying scene hopping and POV leaping.

Cool start. At first I thought the book was going to be quite intriguing, with the empty tombs, the floating boulder, the gargoyle "leering" from every rock. I liked Lia, and felt for the tough decisions she had to make. The abbey kitchen, orchard, and cemetery felt real to me, like a real place.

Then the characters, the plot elements, the fantastical world building — it all began to diminish, giving way to a message of "never harbor doubt" and "have no fear" and "I will deliver your enemies into your hand" etc. Acts of god. I have no problem with inspirational stories and "virtuous characters" but the plot became too predictable after Lea discovered The Medium within her. The wins came too easily and too thoroughly. And I wasn't too crazy about Corvin.

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An unexpected gem

This book was offered at a discount and not many seemed to have listened to it. Based solely on this my expectations were not high as to the books content. I'm happy to say I was pleasantly surprised to find a story which excelled in every way. It was well written, well paced and rooted in human emotion. Each character is complex (and gets even more so in future volumes.) It is an old world book about magic but don't expect any Lord of the Rings type creatures. The story works perfectly well without them. I found myself thinking of the book when away from it, caring and wondering what would happen next to the characters and Jeff Wheeler never disappointed me.
Kate Rudd does an outstanding job in her narration with both male and female voices. She gives each character a distinctive voice with emotions that you can hear the change. (Not all the males sound the same no matter what they are feeling.)
This book and this series is highly recommended!

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Will the Real Wheeler Please Stand Up

HUNGER MADE THE CALMEST MEN CRANKY
I will be honest, after listening to this I looked the author up on the internet. The whole time I was listening, I felt that this was probably a female writer who was using a male pen name to capture a new audience. The writing had that sort of feel to it. According to the internet, Jeff Wheeler is a man and he is married with children. I think if you like Bujold, Moon, McCaffrey, or LeGuin you will like this. Also a little similar to Butcher's, Lord of Fury series.

I believe this to be an early work of JW's and it is obvious he can quit his day job now. I was not thrilled with it, as I had trouble with the main character. I wanted to take her by the shoulders and shake her, she was so bull headed. Yet, I am married to a bull headed woman, go figure. I won't continue the series, but you might like it.

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Nice Surprise from Unknown Author

I wasn't sure what to expect when picking out this book, and was pleasantly surprised with an engaging listen - follows the story of an orphan kitchen girl as she helps an unknown knight.

Nice, strong girl lead, characters a bit cardboard cut-outs- act asone would expect - the shy sidekick, the wise leader, the fiesty girl, the rough on the outside, tender on the inside cook. But the plot and premise is original.

A good listen, and I bought the following one in the series.

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I'll take my sermon at church, thanks!

Too obviously religiously motivated and preachy for me. But duh, I guess it does take place in an Abby. If you don't mind that, or agree with the authors point of view then I think it would be a great book for you. I didn't hate the book but gave it two stars because it flat out annoyed me with the preaching. It is one of very few first books in a series that did not make me want to buy the subsequent books. I have no intention of finishing the series which means the book just didn't do it for me. In fact, some of my favorite books have religious or spiritual ties but this one was just too in your face and I couldn't get past it. The narrator was fine and the story itself is right up my ally. I love books that involve religion and politics but they don't usually leave the feeling that the author is preaching to me the way this book did. As I said, the story is entertaining, yet typical of the genre, and there are many fabulous reviews of this book leading readers like myself to buying this. However, if you don't want a sermon I would start clear of the Muirwood Abby. If you want one, happy Reading.

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Coming of Age Story

First, I've listened to all three books in the trilogy, so this review covers all of them.

When I first read the summary for this book I wondered why I had gotten it, but luckily it was a pleasant surprise. I'm usually not too fond of coming of age stories but this one was pretty good. The characters developments grow through the story. Even minor characters have depth to them. There's magic and action. I read some reviewers who said there was a lot of preaching and religious aspects but I didn't find it overwhelming or even really thought of this as a religious book, unlike some I've accidentally listened to. After all, the main character was raised in an Abby and the storyline is centered around them.

Lia starts out as a wretched (what we would call an orphan) in an Abby. We get to go along with her on her adventures as she discovers who she really is.

The narrator did an excellent job and added a lot to the story.

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Well written YA Sword and Sourcery novel but...

There are lots of good things to say about this book: the world is imagined in great detail and well described, it is well plotted, the main character is likeable, brave and compassionate, and the magic system is novel and well thought through. There are storms and babies abandoned on the Abbey steps, and swords and horses, an evil Sheriff, brave young knights, a corrupt King, a rebellion that turns into a war and of course, the fate of the world hangs upon the bravery of a very young girl.

And yet… I couldn’t give myself up to this book.

As a book for young adults, I understand that some of the darker possibilities have to be toned down a bit, but books like “Divergent” and “Written In Red” or “Anna Dressed in Blood” manage to tap into a real sense of evil without having to get the splatter-movie level. “The Wretched of Muirwood” sells evil short. The bad guys are just that: bad guys. They are corrupt and brutal but they have all the reality of a faceless mob-boss in a Batman comic.

And the good guys are SO good, it’s like biting into an over-sweet apple: it sets your teeth on edge.

But the real source of my lack of comfort with this book is the magic system. In this world, magic comes from accessing The Medium. Good Guys, born into the right bloodlines, do this by surrendering themselves to the will of The Medium, closing their mind to doubt and fear and doing what The Medium tells them to. Bad guys use an amulet-based technology to force the Medium to do what THEY want to do. The price they pay for this is a slow but inexorable poisoning of their souls.

In other words, the Good Guys in this are fanatical Jihadists that The Medium uses as magical suicide bombers while the bad guys are trying to level the playing field between themselves and an elite set of families who refuse to share either knowledge or power. I hate everything about this set of ideas.

The fact that this snagged at me badly enough to reduce my enjoyment of the book is. of course. a tribute to the quality of the writing.

I knew with absolute certainty that, if I was in this world, I would be a bad guy. I just hope I’d make a better job of it.

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Better than Jeff's other book Fireblood

I'd just completed "Fireblood: Whispers from Mirrowen" and had fairly low expectations when beginning this novel. I was pleasantly surprised. It is hard to believe that they are written by the same author. This story was so much better than Fireblood. The narrator was better as well.

I found I could empathize with the main character Lia. I celebrated her victories and lamented her defeats. It was such a stark contrast from Fireblood where I didn't really care if any of the main characters lived or died. They were all a rather unsavory bunch.

That being said you can tell that writing is not Jeff Wheeler's day job. That doesn't diminish from my enjoyment but you can tell his writing lacks the depth and polish you would find from a fantasy author who makes his living as a writer. I suspect Mr. Wheeler will get there someday if he keeps writing and I would encourage him to do just that.

If you're looking for something polished or an epic fantasy this isn't it. If you want a solid story with a likable main character I'd recommend you pick this up.

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Average

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I had high hopes after reading previous reviews. There was nothing special about this book, it was very average. It filled the time, but I found the main character pretty annoying at times. It is a coming of age story, however the young girl just comes off as a complaining winer rather than a woman trying to find herself. There were times when you just wanted to tell her to "shut up" :-X

I would move on. There is better stuff on Audible.

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Narrator can kill a decent story

Would you recommend this audiobook to a friend? If so, why?

The story itself is decent. Typical fantasy with the protagonist discovering they are special rather than the ordinary person they have been told they are. No surprises there. So don't listen to this story for novelty. Sadly, it is the narrator who makes the story almost too hard to listen to. She fluctuates from sing song words to a stilted articulation of every syllable which is so distracting that it keeps the listener from being lost in the story. I purchased theses books without listening to the example. If I had, I probably would have just read the kindle edition.

What was the most interesting aspect of this story? The least interesting?

The way magic works in the world is interesting.

How could the performance have been better?

A different narrator.

Was this a book you wanted to listen to all in one sitting?

No.

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