Admiral Kurt Vickers is on fleet maneuvers in the Newton System when a heavily damaged Earth light cruiser appears. The captain tells a horrific story. Earth has been invaded, and the defensive fleets in orbit have been annihilated.
For decades, humans have been exploring farther and farther away from Earth and Newton searching for signs of intelligent life. Now that intelligent life has found them, it comes as an invader.
The enemy is ruthless, powerful, and has a disdain for human life. Admiral Vickers has his small fleet taskforce and is hopelessly outnumbered. However, even in darkness there is light, and Admiral Vickers will do whatever is necessary to free Earth from the invaders, even if he has to travel to the worst hellhole in the galaxy to do it.
©2015 Raymond L. Weil (P)2015 Raymond L. Weil
“Ah, the outdoors,' Shallan said. 'I visited that mythical place once.” ― Brandon Sanderson, The Way of Kings
This is the first book I've ever read by Raymond L. Well. The story had an interesting premise. Earth invaded by aliens and a small portion of Earth's fleet is stationed at its single interstellar colony. If I had to compare it to another book, it would probably be John Ringo's book "Live free or Die". I really enjoyed that book by John Ringo and was really expecting to like this book as well.
There are two things that really bothered me about this book. The first is that the invading aliens want to take humans and sell them into slavery in back in their worlds and specifically to sell women into sexual slavery. I know that generally an author mentions this type of stuff to show just how evil the aliens are but for 75% of the book, every conversation between aliens ends with them expounding on how they can't wait to either sell these human women to the brothels or to go to the brothels themselves to (well you get the idea). Even when our human main character returns to his family from visiting an alien planet, when they ask him about the wonders he saw there, the conversation devolves into him explaining the differences between brothels and pleasure houses that these human women would be sold too. By the time I reached the half way point, I had lost count of how many times this was brought up. There is really a strange fixation on sexual slavery in this book.
The second issue I had was repetitive dialogue. In one scene, the admiral is mentioning to the captain that the invading aliens cultural reminds him of the Pirates of the Barbary Coast on earth. In the next scene the admiral is speaking with the governor and again uses the Barbary Coast analogy. Then in the next chapter, the captain walks up to the admiral and ask him "Doesn't these aliens remind you of the Pirates of the Barbary Coast?", then going on to explain the history of those pirates. I don't know if you would consider this sloppy dialogue or if this is how you force feed an idea to the reader but I found it to be very annoying. This is just one example of repetitive dialogue and the story is filled with other instances of this occurring.
As for narration. I will say that I personally believe that Liam Owen is an acquired taste. Not that he is bad at all, just different. When I first heard a book by him, I didn't care for his narration but now that I have listened to at least 4 other books he has read, I like his narration. Also in previous Sci-fi books that Liam has narrated, they did this weird voice modulation whenever he narrated an alien. Thankfully in this book didn't do that I really got to hear the wide variety of voices he has in his repertoire. In fact I was surprised that he is able to even do passible accents in his narration.
So to sum it up, if they had removed the sexual slavery or even toned it down and fixed the dialogue, I would have really like this book. The story ends at a good point and there is definitely room for sequels. As to whether I will be reading any of those if they come out, probably not.
I prefer it when there is some logic to the story. Yes, you have to accept a basic premis: Hyper drive, warp speed, worm holes, something to explain faster than light speed travel. But after that the story should follow logic and and at least some laws of physics.
You can't put a ship in orbit "over New York City", it doesn't work that way. You can't maintain position in an orbit 20 kilometers "below" another object.
I supposed if you don't care about logic it might be tolerable.
I haven't decided
I didn't like the narrator, and combined with the poor dialog it was just cringe worthy in many places.
The author seemed intent on compressing the time frame the story took place in. Interstellar travel takes only a couple of days. A space station can be disassembled in less than a week. An fleet of warships can be gathered up and sent to Earth in less than two weeks. Really? Why couldn't this take months, or even years?
Apparently three weeks is enough to train a human slave everything they would need to serve an alien master, which would include enough language to communicate, customs, food preferences, etc.
And really, with all the people on Earth to choose from, they want middle aged people for the slave market?
Like another reviewer said, very repetitive dialog. There isn't anything else of interest to tell the reader other than the pleasure houses and slave markets?
Earth knew nothing about any other life force in the galaxy until they were invaded. Within two weeks, they know all about the invaders, the systems they trade with, the mercenaries, etc.
When the aliens arrive there is an issue of not speaking the language. Within two weeks everyone seems to be speaking a common language.
Disappointment. The premise is good, it could have been a much better story.
I have purchased over 200 audio books, and this is the first one that I just didn't like and gave a poor review to.
Military and Science
I always enjoy Galactic Empire wars and Slaver wars but this series has an even more interesting premise. I very much enjoyed the book and look forward to the next!
Keep the audiobooks of Slaver Wars, Galactic Empire and this series coming and you have yourself a loyal fan!
Poor character development.
No science, just lots of war.
If you like no mind violence then here it is.
Did not know it was possible to over act voice presentation.
8th grade reading.
the idea behind it was great. i love all the other books from this author and this one didn't disappointted me.
the planet where you can buy anything lol :)
it gives substance to the characters
oh yes no doubt
please continue this great series
Good story line interesting characters the flesh out and become the story.
Liam Owen does an overall good job with his narration. the supposedly six year old was less than believable I raised three boys and two girls.
the character was two young and too simple to be a six year old.
Saying that I will continue the series and keep purchasing both Kindle and Audible editions.
This book has too much politics. I read Sci Fi for the battle stories. This is way too much political in-fighting.
i love storys about magic with adult humor in the storys like Piers Anthony and Orson Scott Card i also like some sci-fi storys. The storys i like best is : On a Pale Horse, The Lost Gate, Ender's Game, Split Infinity. i do not like short storys.
as I said I liked it.
everyone else has said everything you need to know.
for me the best part is when they went shoping...lol
This had to be one of the worst book Raymond Well has written. Constantly repeating made me think he was just adding word count.
"Boring beyond belief."
Plainly put, boring from start to the end. Char. Are very shallow, little creativity in the story.
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