Ordered to fly low-level scans for trilidium on an uninhabited rock of a planetoid known only as X37, Teelak and Adria yearn for more exciting missions. Then they survive a crash landing only to learn the rock isn't as empty as they think. Just what is out there? Will they be rescued?
©2010, 2015 Rebecca J. Vickery (P)2015 Rebecca J. Vickery
This tale was original and the plot clever. Good escape into the SF. :)
The narrator has a clear voice and spoke well. What I found disappointing was that she didn't change her voice for the different characters. I'm sure this is a hard thing to do (I sure can't do it), but the dialogue fell flat. Very little emotion shown.
I don't mean to be critical, just honest.
Report Inappropriate Content