As the prince continues to torment the innocent alien female, the other side of known space hides a powerful alien race known as the Mist Keepers. Queen Andromeda has set her emerald green eyes on the vile Eastern Empire and plans to bring the corrupt human government to its knees.
But will the Mist Keepers be able to crush the malicious Eastern Empire, the strongest human empire in the Midnight Galaxy? Even if the corrupt empire is conquered, will it fall before Minta's faith withers away and who she once was is completely destroyed?
©2009 Paul Mantis; (P)2009 Tate Publishing
Narration was average. But the plot was some of the most elementry story telling I have heard. The alien worlds were barely alien at all and even their god was a poorly renamed christian knock off with stolen bible verses and all. The characters names were hokey and laughable. Could not finish.
A good idea with lots of potential but so poorly written that it leaves the reader frustrated. The characters don't behave in believable ways, they refer to each other with first and last names even in personal conversations and the author seems to feel that it is mandatory to add descriptive words to every statement, the reader said with a frustrated tone.
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