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Terms of Enlistment | [Marko Kloos]

Terms of Enlistment

The year is 2108, and the North American Commonwealth is bursting at the seams. For welfare rats like Andrew Grayson, there are only two ways out of the crime-ridden and filthy welfare tenements, where you’re restricted to 2,000 calories of badly flavored soy every day. You can hope to win the lottery and draw a ticket on a colony ship settling off-world, or you can join the service. With the colony lottery a pipe dream, Andrew chooses to enlist in the armed forces for a shot at real food, a retirement bonus, and maybe a ticket off Earth.
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The year is 2108, and the North American Commonwealth is bursting at the seams. For welfare rats like Andrew Grayson, there are only two ways out of the crime-ridden and filthy welfare tenements, where you’re restricted to 2,000 calories of badly flavored soy every day. You can hope to win the lottery and draw a ticket on a colony ship settling off-world, or you can join the service. With the colony lottery a pipe dream, Andrew chooses to enlist in the armed forces for a shot at real food, a retirement bonus, and maybe a ticket off Earth. But as he starts a career of supposed privilege, he soon learns that the good food and decent health care come at a steep price…and that the settled galaxy holds far greater dangers than military bureaucrats or the gangs that rule the slums.

The debut novel from Marko Kloos, Terms of Enlistment is a new addition to the great military sci-fi tradition of Robert Heinlein, Joe Haldeman, and John Scalzi.

©2014 Mark Kloos (P)2014 Brilliance Audio, all rights reserved.

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    DAVE CO, United States 02-11-14
    DAVE CO, United States 02-11-14 Member Since 2011
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    "Solid military sci-fi."
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    I enjoyed this book. It was a solid showing for a first book and a good lead into a series. The author has an interesting view point of humanity and the future. Kloos does a good job of balancing the tech. So many authors go over the top on tech to the point of drowning out the story. There is enough tech here to keep you interested. The characters were not over the top. I like books that make almost ordinary people into the center of the story. They were believable and I was able to relate to them easily. I enjoyed the boot camp part and it brought back a lot of memories for me. The narrator was easy to listen to and different characters were distinguishable. I would be interested in other books this narrator performed in.

    24 of 25 people found this review helpful
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    John United States 02-23-14
    John United States 02-23-14 Member Since 2010
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    "Right On Target"
    What made the experience of listening to Terms of Enlistment the most enjoyable?

    Good Story combined with excellent narration.


    What other book might you compare Terms of Enlistment to and why?

    Marko Kloos is as good or better than John Ringo or David Weber. I hope this is a start of a series.


    Which scene was your favorite?

    I was a Marine and a D.I. and the boot camp scenes were pretty good. There was a lot of difference between our ultra controlled boot camp and the one in Mr Kloos's book, but I can see how his would have been effective, plus his had the advantage of "washout" which meant going back to a life of extreme poverty and desperation. Those with nothing left to lose make the best recruits.


    Did you have an extreme reaction to this book? Did it make you laugh or cry?

    I was disappointed that the book ended. Been a while since that happened.


    24 of 26 people found this review helpful
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    AudioBookReviewer Madison, WI, United States 02-17-14
    AudioBookReviewer Madison, WI, United States 02-17-14 Member Since 2011

    All of my reviews are on my blog audiobookreviewer dot com

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    "Great Military Science Fiction"

    Terms of Enlistment is a highly entertaining, adrenaline pumping, action packed assault on your imagination. Set in the not to distant future, with smart choices made by Kloos. Mainly the lack of excessive technology, it is there but in not over the top ways. Sometimes military science fiction gets to be little more than a description of the vast technology and its uses. But also in the state of our Earth, much is as we know it yet much has changed or I should say is different as I think the universe Kloos created is unique to ours. As there are vast amounts of people that are on welfare, very little is mentioned of those that are not and left me wondering what the rest of the society was like. The NAC (North American Commonwealth) seems to be a military controlled country that is very busy in keeping the riots, rebels and enemy countries under control, while busily exploring the universe and terraforming new planets to inhabit. Our star of the story is Grayson, a nobody everyday kid, stuck in the welfare tenements that the government has setup for the vast amount of poor. He is a young man that wants to do more with his life than waiting to win the lottery, and joins the military. We get to follow him through basic training and watch him transform from a teenaged punk to a confident man living a purposeful life, with a love story mixed in, as basic training is coed. Much of the first half of the story is filled with Grayson thinking about or messaging the love he made in basic, and the only thing he wants more than anything is to follow her into the space Navy, even though he is stuck on Earth. Several battle scenes had me on the edge of my seat as Kloos delivers highly stressful actions sequences both on Earth and in space. I found Grayson to be very relatable and I love when everyday people are the stars living an extraordinary life, along with a full cast of other interesting characters, high impact action, stress inducing moments, love and loss and love again, alien worlds, a must listen for fans of military science fiction. Needless to say I have already purchased the next book in the series and expect to be blown away.

    I purchased this audiobook for review.

    Please find this complete review and many others at audiobookreviewer dot com

    19 of 21 people found this review helpful
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    Joki Helsinki 06-14-14
    Joki Helsinki 06-14-14 Member Since 2009
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    "Enjoyed The Story"

    Terms of Enlistment is by no means a perfect book but it was one I enjoyed immensely: a non blustery military sci fi that isn't in love with its tech, its military, or right wing politics. Rather, we have an everyman navigating the military as a way out of a dead end life on welfare, who won't suddenly end up captaining a ship or becoming an insta-leader. As well, I appreciated that we didn't have a gender-specific army but instead had capable roles for male and female characters. I read the second book in the series, Lines of Departure, first and liked it enough to buy this first book.

    Story: Andrew Grayson joins the military as a way out of an untenable life in the welfare system of the North American government. He will go through training school and then end up tackling the problematic situation of the deteriorating social structure on Earth. But what is happening on Earth is only one problem in a universe that is about to expand rapidly - and the military is suddenly going to become very needed.

    What I liked about the books is that we have a very ordinary guy. Although he sounds far too educated to have come from a welfare system in which he didn't get higher education (there are no colloquialisms, slang, dialects, etc.) I actually preferred that simple talk for a simple man. Both this first book and the second book start slowly but really pick up steam by midway through. And then, when the action kicks in, Kloos really knows how to escalate it - his characters don't have bad days, they have *really* bad days.

    This is the type of story that isn't about kick butt marines, balls out action, or being macho. It's about being lucky to survive, a feeling of futility but also hope, and living in a world on the brink of falling apart on many levels.

    I listened to the audible version of this and enjoyed the narration.

    15 of 18 people found this review helpful
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    Keith 03-19-14
    Keith 03-19-14 Member Since 2013

    I am serious about Sci-Fi and Fantasy!! Iv'e either read or listened to all of the ones worth it and then some.

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    "Best new military scifi entry in a while! Great!"
    Would you recommend this audiobook to a friend? If so, why?

    I recommend this book to all of you scifi-ers patiently waiting for a new entry from a great author!


    Who was your favorite character and why?

    The protagonist in this story is just a normal guy trying to make a better life for himself and get out of his hometown in the process! You can't help but to root for the guy every step of the way!


    Was there a moment in the book that particularly moved you?

    The fact that you can do the right thing and eventually things will work out makes this book worth the listen and the credit for sure! I don't want to say much about the plot and give it away. Just get this book and you will probably love it just as much as I did!


    Any additional comments?

    The narrator does a wonderful job and is easy to listen to. He makes the story come alive with great character voice and doesn't just drone on in a monotone like some.

    7 of 8 people found this review helpful
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    Jack USA 06-28-14
    Jack USA 06-28-14 Member Since 2014

    End of the world and Sci Fi are my favorites with a lot of historical fiction added in

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    "Sophomoric"
    This book wasn’t for you, but who do you think might enjoy it more?

    Teenage boys who think and converse at the level of a lunch room table.


    Has Terms of Enlistment turned you off from other books in this genre?

    This genre can be done well. Old Man's War is a good example of scifi action with intelligent characters who have moved beyond the limitations and experience of the teenage mind.


    What do you think the narrator could have done better?

    Do not scream. Even when the character is yelling do not scream the words into my ear.


    What reaction did this book spark in you? Anger, sadness, disappointment?

    Disappointment, waste of time, frustration that the writing could not move beyond a few stereotypical characters.


    42 of 55 people found this review helpful
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    Lore SAN JOSE, CA, United States 02-15-15
    Lore SAN JOSE, CA, United States 02-15-15 Member Since 2008

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    "Solid but Ordinary Military Sci Fi"

    A bleak future offers little hope to those born in the overcrowded cities of the North American Commonwealth. Andrew Grayson and his parents live on welfare and he has no intention of inheriting that limited existence from them. Andrew opts for the only choice that appears to be a brighter future - he joins the Armed Forces. After all, if he makes it through boot camp then he will have a consistent paycheck of his own and even an outside shot at leaving Earth by being assigned to the Navy.

    Andrew quickly learns that the promise of a better life in the military comes with many strings attached and that he is just a small cog in a giant machine. We follow Andrew from enlistment through boot camp and then on to his first couple of assignments. His experiences are varied and complicated but unfortunately he never really establishes much of a personality for himself. Kloos creates a futuristic world with interesting technology and a plausible military structure but none of it is able to take the book to the next level.

    Andrew mostly goes along for the ride in the armed forces and he does what he has to do every step of the way, only occasionally pausing to think about right or wrong. This is pretty straight forward military science fiction and it is more interesting as an introduction to a larger story than it is as a standalone work.

    The excellent narrator Luke Daniels does his usual good job but he wasn't enough to push this one to 4 stars for me. The experience was, however, solid enough for me to give book 2 (Lines of Departure) a listen at some point.

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    L. Ber 07-11-14
    L. Ber 07-11-14
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    "Action packed without much of a plot"
    Would you say that listening to this book was time well-spent? Why or why not?

    It looks like the book is set up for a series, but I wouldn't read the next one. I think there are more interesting books out there.


    Has Terms of Enlistment turned you off from other books in this genre?

    I really love science fiction and fantasy genres, but this was my first time listening to military science fiction book. It was missing a lot of what I love - feeling immersed in the world of the characters. The action scenes really came alive, but the plot was too cliched and the main character was too simplistic as well. After killing what seems like a thousand of people in one day, he doesn't try to find out what is happening on Earth? I wouldn't read another book from this genre - too much action not enough thought.


    Which scene was your favorite?

    Battle of Detroit


    8 of 10 people found this review helpful
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    Amazon Customer Chicago, IL 06-25-14
    Amazon Customer Chicago, IL 06-25-14 Member Since 2009

    Emergency physician and fantasy nerd in Chicago.

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    "Setting the stage for a series?"
    Is there anything you would change about this book?

    The plot twist in the middle is quite odd. It's almost like 2 different books.


    Would you recommend Terms of Enlistment to your friends? Why or why not?

    If they were hard-core sci-fi people.


    What does Luke Daniels bring to the story that you wouldn’t experience if you just read the book?

    He's a good narrator.


    Do you think Terms of Enlistment needs a follow-up book? Why or why not?

    Absolutely. This is like the Fellowship of the Ring, it doesn't stand alone very well.


    Any additional comments?

    It's a solid B+ sci-fi book. The combat is really cool. It's a little weird that the most vicious scene is the protagonist fighting people just like him and this is never really processed.

    5 of 6 people found this review helpful
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    Elle in the Great NorthWest Beaverton, OR, United States 07-15-14
    Elle in the Great NorthWest Beaverton, OR, United States 07-15-14

    I LOVE books. And dogs & quilting & beading & volunteering.

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    "Fairly good novel-Superior Narration"

    I purchased this book because it was on sale AND narrated by Luke Daniels. As others have mentioned, Daniels can read the phone book and entertain me. He's the kind of narrator who canl lead me to a book I might not have been interested in previously. Reading the reviews, I was going to not purchase this Scalzi like story except that Daniels narrates it and , damn, he's one good narrator. Did I mention that?

    "Enlistment" is, sadly, a John Scalzi rip off-and Scalzi frequently admits to following in other SF writers footprints. Enlistment was so similar to Old Mans War Old series, but isn't nearly as well written't ......OMW was a great series and Enlistment is so-so.

    Andrew, the depressed welfare kid who hasn't ever had anything of quality in his life, is a young version of Scalzi's "John Perry" an aging man who traded his failing health and senior citizen boredom for a new mutant body and opportunity to help save human life in the galaxy.

    As there are only 2 goods so far in Kloos series we shall see if it continues to follow OMW. If so, I'd recumbent just buying Scalzis novels..they are excellently written, much better than those 2 that Kloos has written.

    Except for Luke Daniels..I'll gave this 4 starts simply because Luke Daniels has the ability to make any book into an excellent one.

    4 of 5 people found this review helpful
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  • Andrew John Rae
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    "Military SciFi in Classic Style"

    Terms of Enlistment is a newly written but old-school military science fiction novel. It follows the protagonist, Andrew Grayson, from high-rise slums through book camp, a combat infantry posting, and then out into space. The tone and style are similar to Robert Henlein's Starship Troopers or Jerry Pournelle's Co-Dominium. The action is up-close and personal, set in a universe where government isn't perfect, conflict isn't clean, and the military gets to play hero on a small scale whilst the overall morality of the conflicts they take part in is constantly questionable.

    At least in this first book of the series, the action is well above average for the genre. In any fire-fight it is easy to visualise where everyone is and what is happening. The technology is plausible, and is never used as a get-out-of-jail-free card by the author.

    The main character is likeable without being super-human. He is no author-avatar with perfect military skills and likeable flaws. He is just a young, impulsive enlisted soldier.

    The secondary characterisation is below par for a novel. Whilst Kloos does a fantastic job of "show, don't tell" with army life and the background political unrest and intrigue, friendships and even romances just appear out of nowhere. After a major plot-turning firefight, most of the casualties are really just names to the reader despite their importance to the main character.

    The plot arc isn't well structured either - although I think this is really an artefact of the way the series was written. I get the impression this is an episodic series broken arbitrarily into novel length portions, in which case the first half of the novel is really establishment of the series plot rather than the novel. If considered as a single novel the initiating event comes around 3/4 of the way through the book. Up till then it's a good read, but it comes as a surprise to find that it's all really just scene setting.

    These issues aren't enough to spoil the book. Go into it imagining that you're listening to the first 10 episodes of a 5 season audio show, and they become style rather than problems. I'm certainly going to give the second book a try based on the first.

    The audio performance by Luke Daniels is okay, but I imagine it might irritate some people. He has an overly-dramatic tone which rolls consonants and stretches vowels. This suits the book, but is a bit wearing on the ears. He does voices prettty well, at least for the main characters. It's hard to imagine him as actual voice of the first-person narrator though, which takes it a star down from the really top notch audio book performances.




    3 of 3 people found this review helpful
  • Mr. R. Chvapil
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    "from fatface to badass"
    If you could sum up Terms of Enlistment in three words, what would they be?

    how a young boy was transformed into a confident soldier and how he followed his heart's dreams despite all difficulties. Sounds familiar? Always works for me! Nicely written by Marko Kloos. The story flows easily. Characters are well defined and Mr Luke Daniels is easy on the ears which helps :)


    What was one of the most memorable moments of Terms of Enlistment?

    Andrew's last combat experience in TA. It felt like Black Hawk down all over again. Only difference being that some of his squad actually survived...just


    Which character – as performed by Luke Daniels – was your favourite?

    I liked all characters. None stood out. Very balanced performance by Luke Daniels. 5stars


    If you made a film of this book, what would be the tag line be?

    Against all odds


    0 of 0 people found this review helpful
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