Owl Dance

By: David Lee Summers

Narrated by: Edward Mittelstedt

Owl Dance is a weird Western steampunk novel. The year is 1876. Sheriff Ramon Morales of Socorro, New Mexico, meets a beguiling woman named Fatemeh Karimi, who is looking to make a new start after escaping the oppression of her homeland. When an ancient life form called Legion comes to Earth, they are pulled into a series of events that will change the history of the world as we know it. In their journeys, Ramon and Fatemeh encounter mad inventors, dangerous outlaws and pirates. Their resources are Ramon's fast draw and Fatemeh's uncanny ability to communicate with owls. The question is, will that be enough to save them when airships from Czarist Russia invade the United States?

©2014 David Lee Summers (P)2017 Sky Warrior Book Publishing, LLC

Great premise, mediocre execution

This book was given to me for free at my request and I provided this unbiased, voluntary review.

In my opinion, Owl Dance had a tremendous amount of potential. As the title says, the book has a great premise, but the execution was mediocre. The story is good, but I felt it wrapped things up far too quickly. It was almost as if the author had hit some sort of length requirement and quickly sewed up the story.

The narrator was not my favorite. He did an adequate job of giving each character a unique voice (for the most part), but his accents were terrible for the Russians. I’m not certain if the Tattoo-like voice (think Loveboat) was not great. Granted, as the book went on, he either got better, or I just got used to it.

All in all, the experience was entertaining, but I found myself wishing for the story to end a little more cleanly and for the international implications to be addressed.

Different but enjoyable

Any additional comments?

I have never read a book quite like this one before. It was a mixture of Western, steampunk, fantasy and history all rolled up with a bit of romance and philosophy. I was fascinated with the strange and changing story and became interested in the fate of the 2 main characters.
The narrator's skill with varying the characters' voices and accents made the characters come alive for me and held my interest.
I voluntarily received a review copy of this book from the narrator in return for an unbiased review

Silly

I felt like this was written by a preteen. It was juvenile and silly. The narration was just as bad. Just awful imo.

Promising

Ramon is a law man with a sense of honor. Fatemeh is an emigrant running from a woman's fate in a muslim country. Together, they have adventure after adventure, leaving behind a tangled web of friends and enemies culminating in a last stand to avoid a Russian invasion. The adventures begin with Ramon saving Fatemeh from a fate worse than death and move on to Fatemeh saving Ramon time after time. In the meanwhile, an ancient and alien life form known to itself as 'Legion' takes an interest in earth and, after a time, takes direct action by inhabiting the mind of the Russian general in charge of executing the invasion of America. What will happen when this life force meets the dynamic duo of Ramon and Fatemeh?

This book was a fun adventure. Fatemeh is a force in herself and an exhilarating character to get to know. My only wish was that her past be more clear and fleshed out and openly discussed. Also, her affinity and ability to communicate with owls was never really fully explained. Ramon is a complicated character, mostly because of his want to always do the right thing. He is not always sure how to get there although Fatemeh is willing to goad him in the right direction when she needs to. Together, they make an entertaining pair during an exciting time in American history.

The narration was on the dry side for me. Mittelstedt speaks slowly so I did speed up the audiobook to 1.5 speed and this improved the quality of the narration. There was a clear distinction between different characters' voices and although the accents weren't the best, they were consistent; however, the narrative sections were done in a somewhat monotone voice which took me out of the story more often than not. I'm hoping book 2 was more developed as to story, plot and narration.

I received this book for free through Audiobook Boom! in exchange for an honest review.

Thank You for Bringing Me Back to the Weird West

I got a promo code in exchange for an honest review, and I'm so glad I did. Owl Dance took me back to the Weird West, that lovely subgenre where gunslingers are prone to meeting aliens, dinosaurs and the like. Here, in this first book in a series, we get a sheriff, a healer from Persia, steampunk mechanisms, an alien presence from afar studying Earth, political cat and mouse games, an invasion and several subplots. I was hooked, and listened in every free moment I had. I took a shine to Ramon and Fatima, the two protagonists, but there are many characters in Owl Dance to get to know and appreciate. I am definitely adding the series to my MUST READ list. If you enjoy westerns, steampunk, good characterization and a broad story which encompasses not only a large tract of the Wild West, but also other nations, get this book.