Ori always believed there had to be more to life than the boundaries of his village. There was only one problem: Omegas were not allowed to leave. Ever. Willing to risk everything to find something more than life as a breeder, he runs. His path inevitably crosses that of a handsome and charming, red-haired wandering alpha simply called Siv. The two make an unlikely pair and surprisingly good traveling companions. For once in his life, Ori finds himself happy, and in that happiness, he finds he might just trust this mysterious stranger. And Ori has a tendency to follow his instincts. For better or for worse.
DISCLAIMER: This book contains sexually explicit content that is intended for a MATURE AUDIENCE ONLY.
©2016 Noah Harris (P)2016 Marini Publishing
There is such a thing as a well developed very short story. This isn't it. There is possibly a good idea here. However the world building is cut & paste and the story line jumps abruptly and seems to contradict itself. The romance and sex/erotica are major plot points but are all implied. There are also lots of editing & grammar issues. The narration wasn't horrible, but reading the mistakes as written didn't do anyone any favors.
Not worth a credit! Even on sale I don't think there is any point in spending $ on it
Unless you are REALLY into 'sort of' Cinderella stories where the M/M bear shifters can get pregnant [but don't] after very little plot or romance or sex or anything, but are finally rescued from 'the pit' which is actually a three story building named 'the rosebud'.
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