When Starla Gibson learns of the bet that the sexy stranger across from her is putting forth to be his darling little slave for the night, she thinks it's a joke. Strong and dominant Starla has been hurt too much to play anyone's subordinate and tells him that she can't possibly sink to sub level. When he presents her with the answer to both their problems, a small bottle of clear liquid that Derek claims is a potion to turn her into the most willing toy he's ever had, Starla can't back out of the challenge. Little does she know that what she's about to experience is going to change the way she looks at herself and the man before her.
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I can usually finish a story even with bad narration, but I'm sorry I just can't do it with this. Which is sad because it's a nice hot listen, but completely ruined by bad narration. I'm not kidding, it's like listening to a 1st grader read. She does not know how to read correctly. She completely ignores punctuation! She turned every sentence into 10 fragments. Stopping after every three words, and emphasizing the wrong words! "What are YOU.............she asked..........his voice rumbling.............through her........your VOICE...........sets me off...........Derek! Aghhhhhhhhh I can't take it. Every sentence is like that. She pauses so often and in the wrong place that you can't tell when one sentence ends and one begins. Speaking of his voice, supposedly its deep and sexy and drives her wild, when in fact she does a horrible horrible male voice that is so far from sexy I would run from him if he sounded like that. Audible is making me give her a star or she wouldn't get any. Sorry Stella, I would have enjoyed this one if i could read it myself or if it was a different narrator, but my 10 year old daughter could have read this better. At least she knows what punctuation is for. I sincerely hope you don't use her in the future as I enjoy your books! ✌🏼️
The narrator needs more practice but this story is good. There is flow all the way through and the lead characters have you "gripped". I would warn of listening out loud for the erotic nature of the story, and you might want to have your sweetie near when you finish!
YOWZERS! Holy cow! This audio may have been short but it was steamy and I would love a follow up story! Starla Gibson ends up in Rio and meets Derek. She ends up drinking a potion after a dare and that is where the heat begins but doesn't end.
The narration by Aundrea Mitchell was very good, it took me a bit to get use to the female voice however.
The story hooked me and I did not want to stop listening. I actually drove around at lunch just so I could listen.
There's always that one candy that you want but you know it's too sweet. And you buy it anyway. That's what this story was. Go ahead and enjoy that candy rush.
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