Prom Night

By: Alyson Belle

Narrated by: Juliana Solo

Length: 2 hrs and 11 mins

Publisher's summary

Ryan has always known that he was different from the other boys....

While Ryan's guy friends were interested in trucks and monsters, he's always preferred the more feminine things in life, even if he hasn't quite admitted it to everyone yet. It's always been hard for him to act like the man people think he is, and it’s getting harder and harder as his senior year prom approaches.

He'll never get a second chance at his senior prom, and he'd love nothing more than to spend it with his longtime crush, the most popular guy in the school. But it wouldn't be the same unless he could be a woman, and Ryan knows that's something he can never really have. He wishes with all his heart that things could be different, but his life is what it is.

When Ryan wakes up the next morning as the girl he’s always dreamed of being, it seems at first that wishes do come true sometimes! But the change is only part of the journey - now he’ll have to quickly adjust to his new body, woo his crush, and make sure that prom is everything he’s dreamed of before the magic that changed him runs out completely!

©2021 Alyson Belle (P)2021 Alyson Belle

Excellent Story but Unexpected Addition

This is a great story and very well-written, and has the potential of being one of my favorites. The narration is also really good, but one unexpected addition is what brought the score down significantly. During a very sensual scene, a large belch somehow made it into the final cut, which thoroughly takes you out of the moment. Disappointing that this was not caught before publishing.

Um, double check the audio.

At 1h 6m into capter 3, as things are "getting steamy" there is either a pen click or mouse button click. Just wait, because about a minute later it sounds like the narrator finished taking a drink (thirsty work,and probably broken into takes) and lets out a burp. Only reason I caught the click was I wasn't sure I heard right when the burp came along. :D I love this author and narrator, but someone totally missed that.

A twist on Freaky Friday.

This was an enjoyable, compelling story.
Ryan knows there's no way his wish for the perfect prom night will come true, until he wakes up one morning as the girl he was meant to be. There's bit of a learning curve, and Nicole realizes not all dreams are worth it, but others might just surprise you.

The narrators voice was fine, good even, but there was a lot of breathy nasal sounds and I found myself listening for them at times, instead of enjoying the story. And then at one point she took a slurp of a drink, right in the middle of a pivotal scene! At first I thought it was a burp, but after listening to it a few times I think it was slurping through a straw! And then a great big ahhh. How that wasn't caught in post production, I have no clue.

I recommend, but 2 problems keeps this from a 10

This was a brilliant story. There's just 2 issues for me.
Problem 1: The characters are Junior/Seniors in highschool. Which means that it's logical to conclude that they're underage! 🤢
Problem 2: While Juliana Solo is normally absolutely top rate of a narrator. Here, she straight up belches. And then you can also here her take a drink afterwards too. How in the world did THAT get past final approval? LOL. It's not a really big deal for me. I found it so funny. But, it still is an interruption.

Still, this is a wonderful little story. And more cohesive than others. Absolutely love it! I absolutely recommend.

Easy listening, great story

easy to listen to was enjoyable and interesting, just enough naughty to keep my interest peaked.

Whoops: narrator BURPED!

This gender-switch erotic short was a nice little story. It revolves around a teenager who feels they were born the wrong gender. They want to attend the upcoming prom and hook up with their cute guy crush. The steamy bits don't come until the end, and ***TRIGGER: attempted sexual assault. Approximately 1 hour, 7 minutes into the story, the narrator BURPS loudly. (No production engineers or other quality control people caught this?)

STORY: ⭐⭐⭐
NARRATION: ⭐⭐ (minus ⭐ for burp)
OVERALL: ⭐⭐⭐

the belch

loved the story everything about it. but what made me give full stars was the belch. I did a double take so hard I damn near drove my semi off the road. I laughed so hard, it was great. 100 out of 100.