Paul Russo's wife just died. While trying to get his family's life back in order, Paul is being tormented by a demon who is holding his wife's spirit hostage on the other side. His fate is intertwined with an old haunted mansion on the north shore of Long Island called Stillwell Manor. Paul must find clues dating back hundreds of years to set his wife's soul free.
©2013 Michael Phillip Cash (P)2013 Michael Phillip Cash
I'd heard this book advertised on the radio and then read a few reviews on amazon touting its fresh approach to an oft visited subject matter. All I can say is this book had very unrealized potential. One particular thing I really disliked (besides the epilogue - if you do listen, do the math on that one) was the way the main character kept revisiting the relevant location. I suppose the author intended him to just be "inexplicably being drawn" but it didn't translate. None of his reasons ever made sense. Just not plausible, even for a ghost story.
This story needed much deeper character development than what was given. It's as if the author came up with a pretty decent and fairly original outline, but then lost the originality when connecting those plot points and instead relied on a checklist of shallow and clichéd filler. I don't even mind a cliché if it's used in a clever way to drive the plot. Instead it became pretty predictable, and the filler never resolved to anything unique in its own right, so it didn't make sense to the story. So much so that by the end and the big plot twist reveal, which was fairly interesting, the impact was lost for me. Again, lots of potential, just unrealized for me.
It was fine if it was intended to just be read to me, but I suppose I've been spoiled by narrators who create personas/voices for each character and act it out. One couldn't really grasp what the character was feeling until the statement was followed by "he screamed" or "she cried", which made it more difficult to connect with already flat characters.
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