Dave reluctantly got to his feet, pulling Joey up as well. They ran through the rain and the storm to their cabin laughing as they got inside and tumbled onto Joey's bunk.
"Oh, we are so sleeping in yours when we're done. Mines going to be soaked." Joey rolled them over so he was on top, reaching for the button of Dave's jeans.
"You won't hear any complaints from me. With the power out, it's going to get cold tonight." Dave stripped off his shirt and tugged at Joey's pulling it over his head.
Joey kissed him and got up to open the locker. "You're okay with this?" he asked, shucking his pants and underwear....
Warning - This story has hot and steamy content and is not suitable for all ages. 18+
©2016 Michael van der Voort (P)2016 Michael van der Voort
I sincerely dislike negative reviews on good or even okay books. You know, "If you haven't anything nice to say, don't say anything at all."
But I'm making a special case for this because it wasn't even okay.
Clearly written by a sexually frustrated woman (or teenage girl, I wouldn't be surprised in the slightest) in the poorly-attempted 'witty' voice of two gay men, in which it seems she's never actually even met a homosexual.
Aswell, the narrator clearly did this as a money job and nothing else; sounding droll and monotone the while time.
The story was uninspired (or maybe overly inspired by terrible gay fanfics and smut and campy teen movies from the 80's-90's). The characters were utterly cliche, one a sweet, businessy boy-scout-type (though not actually a boy scout) and the bad boy with a heart of gold from the wrong side of the tracks.
In short, boring, poor in all accounts, and honestly not even all that arousing.
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