This is a cautionary tale about a wealthy man who meets an invisible man who offers him more wealth and power.
©2014 Keith Jahans (P)2015 Keith Jahans
This short story is very entertaining. Disbelieving the whole situation, the rich man gives in and learns the secret of invisibly. Both characters are well described. Enjoyable.
"Made me laugh"
Yes it was one of things that reminds me to keep my arrogance in check, for a short story it packs a punch and makes you think about doing the little things when a situation changes
The inventor, he knew what was likely and you felt there was an element of revenge in it.
As above the inventor, though you can see he enjoyed the role of the business man but the sly humour of the inventor was more fun
Money can't buy you sense
"Intriguing and Well-Written"
This was an amazingly intriguing story. When I saw that it was only 8 minutes, I thought, "How great can this be in such a short window of time?" But, Keith Jahan tells a captivating story with such rich detail, I hated for it to end! Even though, the ending was so well-timed, it felt as if I'd read an entire novel! Great job, Keith! On both the story and the narration. Very well-done!
"Very enjoyable listen!"
As a short story, it is right up there amongst the top and I can see myself listening to this several more times in the future.
It was to the point! No fluff, no nonsense - just a good quality story. Funny but also thought provoking, as the best tales are.
I often find author who narrate their own books quite poor but this is definitely the exception to the rule - the narration is too quality and very engaging. Good quality audio throughout, including the music, which helped to set the tone.
I hope to see more stories by Keith Jahans appearing very soon.
Mostly, it made me THINK! I think it is a story we can all adapt and relate to various parts of our own lives.
Sometimes it is good to take a chance on something completely new, as I did here - my instincts were entirely correct! Fun and thought provoking.
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