Charlotte reached down to finger herself as she watched him, feeling how wet she was, how much she wanted this. Paul gave her a warm smile and moved over her again, pressing in with a soft moan.
Charlotte had certainly had her share of lovers in the past, but there was something about Paul that was gentle. He seemed to truly care about her pleasure over his own. He moved slowly inside of her, building their desire with the same tender care one might use for nurturing a reluctant fire. She wrapped her arms around his neck.
"Beautiful," murmured Paul, moving a little faster now. He rolled them over so....
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I Love a great supernatural tale, a Love story, PNR, a Cool Mystery and Most Sci-Fi....if there are vampires, weres or witches in it, that's a plus! Basically I am a 40+ y/o young at heart woman rediscovering the wonderful world of books and am now addicted! Lol I LOVE AUDIBLE!!!!!
Charlotte is on vacation and decides to let herself let her hair down and have fun....2 men to choose from in a sandy beach paradise....she ends up having a very naughty night with Paul that may turn out to be more! Narration was pretty good and it was a fun and quick listen!
I received this book as an ARC for an honest review; and I have to say that when I first started it I thought it was going to be a 1 star. I immediately got the impression I'd made a mistake. But, I kept listening and actually, the story was good. It was very short, but didn't feel incomplete. I was pleasantly surprised by the story itself.
The narration wasn't bad, but it lacked any real depth. So, that was somewhat of a drawback. It felt more like being read to. And, I started to feel like the characters talking about running for their lives would sound the same way they'd talk about eating dessert. There just was no change in tone with whatever was going on. BUT, it wasn't bad. I couldn't even say distracting. And, I was able to enjoy it and finish it.
Does it make you feel better to no vote all my reviews? Sad. If it makes you happy have at it then. Hope it brings you a little joy.
Who doesn’t love a HOT short story?
And this is exactly that Charlotte is off for a weeks’ vacation that turns in to a romance.
Paul too is on vacation drawn to Charlotte.
They sure steam up the sheets but its more than that. Or it could be.
I enjoyed the narrator as well she did a great job bring this story to life.
*Given for an honest review.*
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