Adults 18+ only: This 4,300 word novelette contains M/F sexual scenes, primarily involving the impregnation and pregnancy of a young woman, rough sex, and other related themes.
The Virgin Girl Impregnated by Many Men in the Small Room tells the story of a sexy 18-year-old virgin woman who is kidnapped by multiple men and taken to live in a small secluded room. Once she is in the room, she reluctantly accepts her fate - that she will be deflowered and impregnated however they see fit. She comes to find out that this kidnapping is different from what other women have experienced, since it involves her getting a new baby to care for.
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Very deceptive. I definitely believe there were quite a few aspects of this book that could have made it much more interesting, and adrenaline pumping.
She could have made it more realistic. There needed to be a lot more resistance on the part of the main character. She could also have made this short novella a bit longer by adding more encounters vs. the two described. More assortment to fall in line with what the title promises: "...Many men..." Perhaps, the main character meets some of the other girls who may be in similar circumstances, and share their experiences. Perhaps, they could have shared valuable information, in order for the main character to meet her clients' expectations to keep from being abused. All around, it could have been more dramatic.
Yes! A younger voice.
Disappointment, dissatisfaction, and a sense of dangling.
I think this author has potential in erotica if she decided to write an actual novel. Develop the characters, more. Build momentum.
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