You like to think you're different, special somehow. But trust me, I'll have you wet and begging for it before you can think of all those bullshit, good-girl reasons why not. I'm your darkest secret. Your dirtiest fantasy. Who am I? The Seducer. And I've never lost a case. Until her. Keely Fawes. My mysterious new target.
Someone wants to destroy her--and I'm their weapon of choice. Her secrets could be my undoing. Her innocence will ruin me. But I don't care. I'm going to show her how fucking good it feels to be bad. She'll come screaming my name if it's the last thing I do.
©2015 Roxy Sloane (P)2014 Audible Inc.
If I had a dollar for every time this author mentions the exact dimensions of our hero's umhmm, I would be loaded! It became almost laughable near the end and I'm sure that was not the intended reaction. The sex scenes wile scorching hot the first time heard, were very repetitive and therefore fell flat towards the conclusion of the story. Both male and female narrators mispronounced many words but other than these few peeves of mine the book was pretty good. Maybe buy on a sale. Or not...
I didn't read the print version, but the listen was good.
Less talk about how big he was and make him more human, less a**hole
Very good voices for both man and female
no went half way and skipped to the last 4 chapters was bored
It could have been a good story if the H/h was more beliveable, the hero was just so much of a jacka** that i started to hope someone would beat his A**
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GREAT HOT SEX!!! WHO CAN BEAT THAT!!! VON THATS WHO. Warning : make sure your significant other or you BOB is close by because Panties will come off.😜😜😜. I give this book and narration 👍👍👍 + 🔥🔥🔥🔥
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THIS REVIEW CONTAINS SPOILERS!!
Yeah i'm a sucker for a dirty talker. So far Keely isn't too stupid. Vaughn is very much an alpha dom dirty talker but his single minded focus on sex is kinda off putting and the fact that Keely eats that up is a touch wtf. I get that she's a sex deprived almost virgin, but c'mon. a total stranger tells you he wants to do you and you give a few weak no no nos and then the next thing we know you are giving him a handjob in the bathroom at a museum. There were things that happened that seemed off and only added in because the author thought it would be cool for them to have sex there. (the museum bathroom, the law library, etc...) I hope their relationship evolves to include other dimensions other than dirty kinky sex.
So it looks like Vaughn is still obsessed with nothing but sex. Keely is just stupid. So..... this part had some revelations. (spoiler removed) There still isn't anything between Keely and Vaughn but blind lust and a mega-crap-ton of 3rd base sex. Based on what we are told in the story, she has no idea what his full name is, no idea how old he is, no idea what he does for a living, and no idea he does nothing but think about his cock in her mouth. Oh and how bad he wants to make her come her brains out. I'm SOOOOOOO sick of that phrase. The cliffy ending played out like a very bad soap opera. Oh yeah I'm in for some long haul fuckery with this one. On to part 3...
SEVEN MINUTES INTO PART 3 and we already get hit with "come your brains out". STAAAAPPPPPP!!!!!! Ok Vaughn's dialogue is 90% sex talk 95% of his inner monologue is thinking about sex. I swear I don't think they've had an actual conversation.
Ok I rarely ever say this and I know this is erotica but . There IS a such thing as too much sex in a book. It annoys me to no end that Keely won't say no to him and lets him do her anywhere at anytime.
Brent?? Oh he's a grade a douche.
Ok it only took three chapters and 9 minutes for Keely to "come her brains out". I almost wanna go back to the first two parts to see where it first showed up but ya'know I'm not that masochistic. But we do have another phrase in the mix. Vaughn has described Keely as "magical" on a few occasions. her snatch is magical, she is magical, her body is magical. blah blah blah, i'm waiting for him to notice the golden fairy dust spilling out of her as she walks down the street. He is also going off the reservation by the constant comparisons to her peachy globes or her peach shaped butt. In this part we see a whole new Keely. She is a corporate powerhouse and a sexual equal to Vaughn. It would have been nice to see the transition. it's like who is this person. Vaughn is still all about sex and his 9 inch "member". It's true, he doesn't let us forget how wet and tight Keely's snatch is or how big his junk is. MULTIPLE TIMES. And seriously these two are nymphos. They are reckless with it at times. oh and Vaughn is a special kind of dude. I think he likes the taste of his jizz as much as Keely does.
The mystery is actually pretty interesting but the story would be so much better if the characters actually had conversation not pertaining to sex or the ashcroft issue. So over this book. At this point i just wanna know what happens with the company and with brent. for such a high profile ceo she and vaughn are boning their way across manhattan. #OverIt
OK so we found out what happened and and everyone lived happily ever after. If I got this book one at a time I would be PISSED. The cliffhangers weren't really needed. The book was a full book just chopped into novellas. Not my job to advise authors how to make their money and build their base but if you are gonna do this novel chop bullshit then you need to make sure your story is ROCK SOLID. I think this author has potential to be a fantastic writer but she's just not there yet. The characters were all 1 dimensional. They all were what you thought they were at their first impression. None of the characters grew and most were either unlikeable or just meh.
Story - 2 it was ok, just ok. could have been better, the freaky nympho bunny sex actually killed the book because there was something sexual happening in damn near every chapter or every other chapter. way too much and i ended up ignoring most of it. even the built up anal scene was a flop by the time it happened.
Narrators - the narrators were ok. There were times when they were over the top and times where they were perfect. I think they will be really good if given enough practice and some good material. The guy's voice could have been a bit deeper, but that's just my preference. At first i wanted to hear Sebastian York, but even with his dreamy voice i'd get sick of all the gratuitous sex.
Love all romance, dark romance, romantic comedy and suspenseful romance!
This series is amazing! Has it all from drama, suspense, HOT SEX, thrills, betrayal, and more! Vaughn and Keely sizzle together but they have quite the road to travel! A definite edge of your (wet) seat read!
I really enjoyed this book. The only thing I could have done with out was the fact the author uses of the word cunt and cock. call a dick a dick and call a pussy a pussy.
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