During a weak moment while in-between girl friends, Wendy agrees to become a key holder for a friend to help him indulge his chastity fetish. This seeming innocuous act inadvertently leads to the discovery of her affinity for dominating others and a career as a no-nonsense personal trainer for bottoms and pony girls/boys.
©2012 Jim Lyon (P)2014 Jim Lyon
I have just gone through the audio book "The Accidental Domme". I rarely choose to listen to a story over reading it myself, and I should do it more often. One can more easily let himself get carried away in the story by the rhythm and cadence of spoken prose as one would listen to a good song, provided the narrator is talented. It is so the case here.
This story will appeal especially to those into poney play and piercing. It also dabbles into chastity play, whipping and public play. Some of the scenes appealed to my senses but not all of them. Much effort was put in describing scenes, at the detriment of a deep dive to the feelings and the senses. It was a bit like listening to a visual rendering of an act instead of relating the emotional state of the characters. The storyline was also somewhat too farfetched to my liking, but that is just personal preferences.
I guess I like darker stories with mixed and conflicting emotions, not only mixed sensations. Everybody seemed to be too delighted of living out their fantasies to be true, or to seem realistic. It lacked perspective, yet the writing was strong and fluid, and the narrator's pleasant voice from the audiobook added tempo and sexyness to the overall experience.
Nice to see Femdom
The summary about the book made me think that there would be more men in it than there really was. The majority of the book was F/f and pony play. There are quite a few piercings, needle play, and branding. I have never been a fan of branding and it would be better as a tattoo because even if you think you will be with a person forever, it is better to have something that could potentially be removed. The story was mostly focused on the acts that go on and less on the emotional background of the characters that would have made them more enjoyable.
Narrator was fine.
Not at all. The world isn't ready for this kind of thing.
I got this audio file free in exchange for a review.
It was okay
Yes as I received a free copy in exchange for a review.
This story was different to what I expected from the brief synopsis. It quickly moves from one of chastity to include, piercing/needle play, branding and pony play. A large part of the story was Femdom F/f play which was a delightful surprise for me.
I was tardy with my review and am struggling to recall the full-story. So I guess that means it wasn't overly memorable :/
Narration - I enjoyed the narrators voice, she did a great job.
Adult Contemporary Erotica with BDSM. This is mainly girl on girl novella. 3rd person. Multiple POVs. My kink-o-meter reads heavy for permanent marks.
The Accidental Domme is an excellent Femdom Gateway with quick, yet smooth progression from piercing to ponies. My kinky self had a ball listening to pony play in audio!
I like to read F/f over F/m, so when the Audiobook started it lost me on Dave and chastity until Dave got pierced. Oh yes, I like that a lot since I also share the love for the piercings and have few. Incorporating piercing into play was interesting to read about and I had myself “a think”, although I have to admit, I cringed a bit for Dave, even though I know he enjoyed himself.
Once the book shifted to F/f I was totally on board and since I forgot it had pony play, I was pleasantly surprised and cheered for it while riding in the passenger seat of my DH’s car. In order to go into more detail about this book, I would have to go into pony play which is not something I’ll do, since it would make me feel uncomfortable here, but I’ll say I LOVED IT! BRING IT ON! YEY PONIES!
Several things I would change:
- Clinical assessment.: More hot, erotic words than GYN appropriate words please.
- POV was very difficult to process in audio and to really get into all the works I would have to sit and listen to the book rather than have it play in the background while I go about my chores (or sit in the car). I would need to write down the players, since I had to listen to it twice to understand who was who.
I liked her voice, it was sexy and smooth and I think she did a good job narrating the different POVs, but I would like for the narrator to have used different, more pronounced, voices for each character's dialogue.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book with ponies and piercings and one of the best parts of this work is the” new in the scene” Domme POV and her feelings about what she was doing. I would read more F/f from this Author. I recommend this book to readers and listeners who enjoy Femdom with male and female submissives(and slaves), piercings, orgasm control and a really classy display of sadism and pony play. Highly recommend for kinky readers who want to read BDSM where BDSM is just BDSM without the sad, twisted or tortured character backstories.
provided by the Author through BDSM group on Goodreads
I am conflicted how I feel about this book. On one hand it was nice to hear/listen to the Domme side of things. I was hoping that by listening to this book I would have a whole other perspective of this type of pairing but sadly it did not work for me. Hence the 3 stars.
The author did a pretty good job of setting the scene for the reader/listener. I even squirmed a bit when the needle play started it made me hurt all over ... I am definitely NOT a pain slut. OUCH!
If you are into Fem-Dom and Ff who are into S&M and pony play you will like this book. The author definitely wrote a good book. If your not into reading/listening to this type of book then your better off reading something else.
I thought the scenario of a personal trainer becoming a Domme and training subs in the gym was very unique. AWESOME idea! Especially since I think they are a bit sadistic to begin with ;). Then taking that training and whipping subs into shape on pony farm to train ponies believable.
It is an interesting book with some interesting scenarios but the book lacks good character development but it is a short book and the author packed the book with a lot of other interesting things. I personally would have liked a fuller story better though.
Yes I was able to differentiate between characters.
My interest is broad so I read thrillers,erotica, biography,true crime ,detective and travel stories among others.
The story is narrated in lucid style with a feminine touch.I rate it highly among the audiobooks I have listened to.
My favourite character in the book is Wendy because she is both cute and submissive .She develops from one who is completely ignorant of submission and domination to a passionate participant in the game of BDSM with Dave her partner.
This is my first audiobook experience of Femdom.
It makes exciting reading with hot sex scenes about how to tease pussy with the combined stimuli of tongue and fingers,exploring someones sexuality through chastity control as well as the benefits of chastity devices.
Above all,the book makes it clear that the relationship between a mistress and her slave is contractual.
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