I would ike to see this author take the writing further. He made haveing a pencil size worm come out of his leg sound bland. This is where most adults want the real guts of a story. What did it feel like pulling his pants over it, where was it on his leg? Did he need to hide it under his clothes? Was he dating or married? If these experiences were fleshed out it would leave the dull classroom and move into the adult reading arena.
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