awful writing aside - the narrator was just the most terrible thing ive come across.
do you need to use the same adjective over and over and over.... and over again? also - whats with the long descriptive of totally useless elements. okay stop describing the out fits.. "yellow dress" will do just fine.
one word. headache.
meh.. not really. I love a gay girls romp through lala land but the writer and narrator just destroyed it for me. couldnt finish
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