A few more years of writing experience for the author? And a little research by the author? Maybe?
The main character. Although intro'ed as a ' vet with Special Forces' training, his weapon of choice was tada... a 20 gauge pump shotgun? I gave up when Tragger the main character observed someone as she 'sighted down the automatic barrel.' Later Tragger 'slid back the top of the automatic...' Thank God no one 'checked the magazine on their revolver'. another favorite of mine. Give me a break. Do some research! Would love to have my money back.
No. Too over the top.
Don't bother if you are over 15 years of age.
I am a longtime fan of Zombie fiction, but two hours of this 'novel' was about all I could take. There was nothing about this story that did not disappoint me. The writer's style was amateurish and riddled with cliches and clumsy puns. His lack of knowledge about gunfights and tactics were downright embarrassing and in no way believable as hard as I tried to just go with it. The protagonist and his family would have lasted about 2 hours had any part of this story even the least bit true to the genre. But most of all this guy just can't write. His characters are not even one dimensional and the plot development is on a par with what one might expect from an 8th grade creative writing class.
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