What would have made Fifty Shades of Grey better?
Should have to be rewritten from scratch.
What was most disappointing about E. L. James’s story?
so boring! The way Anastasia drones on and on!
How did the narrator detract from the book?
Poor narrator did all she could but to no avail!
If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from Fifty Shades of Grey?
Any additional comments?