Get rid of the narrator
the story line was good.
edit out the mistakes
the narrator cleared his throat, and grossed me out. I thought something was wrong with the recording until I realized he was repeating the line because he was not reading it right.
He kept mispronouncing the characters names. This was the worse narrator I have every listened to. Because of William Butler I really did not enjoy this book as much as I should have. Please, please review the people that read for you I can promise you will loose listeners If they have to listen to the gross way this man coughed and cleared his throat on the recording. It was truly gross. Michelle you books are really good please don't make this mistake again.
I loved the whole story. the narrator was fun and on point. At times I wanted to put hands on the child's mother. MUST READ.You will not be sorry you read this book.
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