The development of the relationship.
I have read other books by this author, and she has issues with plotting. I would have spent a little less time on the sex and a little more time developing a plot and creating a better climax (no pun intended). The book is more sex than story. I understand that she's trying to develop the characters through the sex, and the sex is well done, but we see very little of their characters outside of the sex.
She's excellent at developing different voices for difference characters. She may be one of my favorite narrators.
"Nine and a Half Weeks in an Elevator"
This author has so much potential, but she doesn't yet have the skill to experiment with plot the way she does.
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