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P. Creadick

delery

Atlanta, GA United States | Member Since 2013

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  • Thirteen Hours

    • UNABRIDGED (9 hrs and 49 mins)
    • By Meghan O’ Brien
    • Narrated By Alicyn Aimes
    • Whispersync for Voice-ready
    Overall
    (148)
    Performance
    (141)
    Story
    (142)

    It's her birthday but lonely workaholic Dana Watts is at the office late, drafting a proposal. The very last interruption she expects comes in the form of the most beautiful breasts she has ever seen. These belong to an incredibly hot woman, who is standing in front of her, stripping to music. Laurel Stanley performs strip-o-grams to pay her way through school. She has never encountered a more ungrateful recipient than Dana. The uptight project manager makes it clear that she is furious to be distracted from her work by the "gift".

    Bonnie says: "Pretty good for light lesbian erotica"
    "Plotting is Difficult for this Author"
    Overall
    Performance
    Story
    What made the experience of listening to Thirteen Hours the most enjoyable?

    The development of the relationship.


    How would you have changed the story to make it more enjoyable?

    I have read other books by this author, and she has issues with plotting. I would have spent a little less time on the sex and a little more time developing a plot and creating a better climax (no pun intended). The book is more sex than story. I understand that she's trying to develop the characters through the sex, and the sex is well done, but we see very little of their characters outside of the sex.


    What about Alicyn Aimes’s performance did you like?

    She's excellent at developing different voices for difference characters. She may be one of my favorite narrators.


    If you were to make a film of this book, what would the tag line be?

    "Nine and a Half Weeks in an Elevator"


    Any additional comments?

    This author has so much potential, but she doesn't yet have the skill to experiment with plot the way she does.

    2 of 2 people found this review helpful

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