I found the overall story to be quite entertaining, but the writing was a bit cumbersome and juvenile in some places. This writer has the potential to be a great writer one day, unfortunately for us today is not that day. I am looking forward to seeing his future work and hoping that he comes up with better ways to indicate the characters he is talking about. I got rather tired of hearing the reader say Valentine this and Valentine that.
A different narrator.
Probably not. Her idea was a good one, but her execution left much to be desired.
The voice she chose for the main character was annoying and at times painful. It was like watching a car crash. You want to look away, but you can't.
The idea of the story was great.
Just when I thought I would be able to overlook the poor narration the storyline became unbelievable. I Ike stories with strong female characters, but this books main character just seemed needy.
Yes, the book kept me guessing about what would happen next. Just when I thought I knew it would turn out to be something else.
I can't really say that any one character was my favorite because they each helped the story be believable and enjoyable.
This book caused me to experience a range of emotion from frustration to laughter. To me this is what is necessary to bring a good book about.
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