I don't understand the good reviews on Amazon. Maybe it gets better in the second half. I didn't make it that far -- the first half was too painful to continue.
A logical plot, with more sensible outcomes, and fewer completely inane dialogues, particularly those between Jack and Rachel.
Narration wasn't great, but this was not the problem.
To many to enumerate.
The first 10 or 20% of the book was okay, but it was downhill from there.
My biggest problem was some of the dialogue between Lilly and Tierney. Actually a lot of the dialogue. Some of the lines would win the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest. The plot & story line were pretty good though.
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